El amor es como una fogata,
Si no tienes cuidado te quemarás.
Es un riesgo acercarse a la hoguera.
Pero es un riesgo que vale la pena tomar.
Porque una vez que encuentras esa distancia perfecta del fuego,
Te encuentras con una hermosa ola de comodidad
Así es el amor, si no tienes cuidado,
Podrías quemarte y te sentirás el peor dolor que jamás has sentido.
Peor que cualquier quemadura normal, ésta es una quemadura en el corazón.
Pero si encuentras el amor perfecto, esta distancia perfecta,
Sentirás una ola de amor y serenidad.
Por eso el amor es coma una fogata.
Este poema se trata del amor, y lo compara con un fogata. Porque a medida que te acercas al fogata, te quemas más. El calor que sale de la fogata es simbólico para el amor y todas las emociones que están involucradas en él. Veo el amor como un sentimiento apasionado y ardiente que tiene sus momentos de comodidad y seguridad, pero también las emociones negativas asociadas con él, como la ira y las peleas. Cuando digo que uno necesita encontrar la distancia perfecta del fuego para sentir la calidez y la comodidad que ofrece sin quemarse, se compara al igual que con el amor, no puedes hacer que el mundo gire en torno a esa persona para que tengas tu propia vida.
9 comentarios sobre “El Amor Es Como Una Fogata”
This poem is so beautiful! I feel like it is both a mix of a bit of bitterness as well as appreciation of love, and it makes the poem that much deeper. I’ve heard metaphors comparing love to a fire before, but I really loved what you said about how you have to find the perfect distance from it. Great job Ricky!
I really liked this poem because it describes that love can be the best or worst feeling depending on how you deal with it. I also believe that the use of the fire to describe love was very good and thought provoking.
I enjoyed this poem a lot for many reasons. It had a very innocent vibe to it, yet that didn’t diminish the deep meaning behind the point you were displaying. Bonfires are something everyone enjoys and most have experienced, so even if one hasn’t experienced love yet, they get an idea through something they’re familiar with. I also liked the fact that it was obvious you were connecting parts of the poem to your personal life and how «it can burn you» but then «with the right distance, you’ll find love». This just goes to show how so much hope is involved with love, despite its downsides. This was beautiful Ricky, I loved it 🙂
I think this is a fantastic poem. The comparison that you made isn’t something I would associate with love, but as soon as you began to describe, I felt like it was the perfect fit, so you did a great job with it. I like the idea that being in a good place in love is like finding the right distance from the bonfire, and you might have to get hurt or be too far from it before finding that distance. Really nice job!
Ricky, this was gorgeous. Everything about this poem made my heart ache, and the comparison between the two was perfect. You did an amazing job. The way you described how love felt once you found it perfectly really resonated with me. Thank you.
Ricky I love this poem, it shows how love is something you can both gain from and be hurt from. I agree with the fact that love is like fire and can hurt you if you get too close. This poem was very good and a great read. I love you ricky.
I really liked this poem Rick because I could connect to it. Love can mean many different things to everyone and I think you described this well. It can be the best thing to happen to someone and also the worst. I really think you did a great job and you’ve got a future in poetry.
Ricky, I really enjoyed this poem. You made a great point about being in a comfortable spot, one where your happy and so you don’t get hurt. I think many people find it hard to find this comfort spot sometimes, and you described it beautifully. Nice job rick, proud of you buddy. Keep up the good work!!!!
I love the imagery in this poem! I feel like I can see and feel it while I read it and that’s such an amazing feeling. Also, I love how you explored the darker side of love. Love tends to be something people regard as only positive, never seeing the danger (or “fire”) lurking underneath. You visited this darker side beautifully!