Goal 10
- one or more paragraphs; well organized idea or point of view well stated; written in an interesting style and voice; words used are carefully chosen, memorable, and bring the comment to life; sentence fluency is smooth, natural and expressive
- shows connection to blog post content and other comments; meaningful addition to topic of blog post by bringing in new perspective and resources; original ideas are expressed; solid evidence of thinking and content knowledge present; clearly expresses the desire to continue a conversation; several sources cited and linked to other relevant resources cited
Proficient 8
- one paragraph; organized written in a somewhat; interesting style and voice; words chosen mostly reflect author’s personality and brings comment to life for the most part sentence fluency is mostly achieved
- shows some reference and connection to the post and other comments; some addition to topic of blog post; evidence of thinking developing and knowledge content present; new sources of information mentioned; other resources mentioned
Developing 6
- 2-3 sentences; comment is poorly organized; comment has no style or voice; words used are unimpressive; sentence fluency is absent- sentences feel unnatural
- no original idea is expressed; nothing is added to topic or ideas of blog post; makes minimal to no reference to blog post; no links to further information or resources shows no evidence of; understanding or having read blog post and/or other comments; repetition of other comments
Unsatisfactory 4
- writing is unacceptable for age and grade level; a few words or incomplete sentence; tone is disrespectful and inappropriate
- content is inappropriate; content is unrelated to the blog post; fails to show respect towards someone else’s opinion